Esempio: <profileDesc> (text-profile description)
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2 The TEI Header
<teiHeader> (fr)
<teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>La Parisienne</title>
<author>Henry BECQUE</author>
</titleStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<distributor>ATILF (Analyse et Traitement Informatique de la Langue Française)</distributor>
<idno type="FRANTEXT">L434</idno>
<address>
<addrLine>44, avenue de la Libération</addrLine>
<addrLine>BP 30687</addrLine>
<addrLine>54063 Nancy Cedex</addrLine>
<addrLine>FRANCE</addrLine>
</address>
<availability status="free">
<p>Dans un cadre de recherche ou d'enseignement</p>
</availability>
</publicationStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<biblStruct>
<monogr>
<imprint>
<publisher>Paris : Fasquelle, 1922.</publisher>
</imprint>
</monogr>
</biblStruct>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date>1885</date>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
</teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>La Parisienne</title>
<author>Henry BECQUE</author>
</titleStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<distributor>ATILF (Analyse et Traitement Informatique de la Langue Française)</distributor>
<idno type="FRANTEXT">L434</idno>
<address>
<addrLine>44, avenue de la Libération</addrLine>
<addrLine>BP 30687</addrLine>
<addrLine>54063 Nancy Cedex</addrLine>
<addrLine>FRANCE</addrLine>
</address>
<availability status="free">
<p>Dans un cadre de recherche ou d'enseignement</p>
</availability>
</publicationStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<biblStruct>
<monogr>
<imprint>
<publisher>Paris : Fasquelle, 1922.</publisher>
</imprint>
</monogr>
</biblStruct>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date>1885</date>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
</teiHeader>
<profileDesc> (en)
<profileDesc>
<langUsage>
<language ident="fr">French</language>
</langUsage>
<textDesc n="novel">
<channel mode="w">print; part issues</channel>
<constitution type="single"/>
<derivation type="original"/>
<domain type="art"/>
<factuality type="fiction"/>
<interaction type="none"/>
<preparedness type="prepared"/>
<purpose type="entertain" degree="high"/>
<purpose type="inform" degree="medium"/>
</textDesc>
<settingDesc>
<setting>
<name>Paris, France</name>
<time>Late 19th century</time>
</setting>
</settingDesc>
</profileDesc>
<langUsage>
<language ident="fr">French</language>
</langUsage>
<textDesc n="novel">
<channel mode="w">print; part issues</channel>
<constitution type="single"/>
<derivation type="original"/>
<domain type="art"/>
<factuality type="fiction"/>
<interaction type="none"/>
<preparedness type="prepared"/>
<purpose type="entertain" degree="high"/>
<purpose type="inform" degree="medium"/>
</textDesc>
<settingDesc>
<setting>
<name>Paris, France</name>
<time>Late 19th century</time>
</setting>
</settingDesc>
</profileDesc>
<profileDesc> (fr)
<profileDesc>
<langUsage>
<language ident="fr">français</language>
</langUsage>
<textDesc n="roman">
<channel mode="w">copie; extraits </channel>
<constitution type="single"/>
<derivation type="original"/>
<domain type="art"/>
<factuality type="fiction"/>
<interaction type="none"/>
<preparedness type="prepare"/>
<purpose type="distraction" degree="high"/>
<purpose type="information"
degree="medium"/>
</textDesc>
<settingDesc>
<setting>
<name>Paris, France</name>
<time>Fin 19e</time>
</setting>
</settingDesc>
</profileDesc>
<langUsage>
<language ident="fr">français</language>
</langUsage>
<textDesc n="roman">
<channel mode="w">copie; extraits </channel>
<constitution type="single"/>
<derivation type="original"/>
<domain type="art"/>
<factuality type="fiction"/>
<interaction type="none"/>
<preparedness type="prepare"/>
<purpose type="distraction" degree="high"/>
<purpose type="information"
degree="medium"/>
</textDesc>
<settingDesc>
<setting>
<name>Paris, France</name>
<time>Fin 19e</time>
</setting>
</settingDesc>
</profileDesc>
<profileDesc> (zh-TW)
<profileDesc>
<langUsage>
<language ident="fr">法文</language>
</langUsage>
<textDesc n="novel">
<channel mode="w">出版品；專題輯</channel>
<constitution type="single"/>
<derivation type="original"/>
<domain type="art"/>
<factuality type="fiction"/>
<interaction type="none"/>
<preparedness type="prepared"/>
<purpose type="entertain" degree="high"/>
<purpose type="inform" degree="medium"/>
</textDesc>
<settingDesc>
<setting>
<name>法國巴黎</name>
<time>19世紀晚期</time>
</setting>
</settingDesc>
</profileDesc>
<langUsage>
<language ident="fr">法文</language>
</langUsage>
<textDesc n="novel">
<channel mode="w">出版品；專題輯</channel>
<constitution type="single"/>
<derivation type="original"/>
<domain type="art"/>
<factuality type="fiction"/>
<interaction type="none"/>
<preparedness type="prepared"/>
<purpose type="entertain" degree="high"/>
<purpose type="inform" degree="medium"/>
</textDesc>
<settingDesc>
<setting>
<name>法國巴黎</name>
<time>19世紀晚期</time>
</setting>
</settingDesc>
</profileDesc>
<abstract> (en)
<profileDesc>
<abstract resp="#LB">
<p>Good database design involves the acquisition and deployment of
skills which have a wider relevance to the educational process. From
a set of more or less instinctive rules of thumb a formal discipline
or "methodology" of database design has evolved. Applying that
methodology can be of great benefit to a very wide range of academic
subjects: it requires fundamental skills of abstraction and
generalisation and it provides a simple mechanism whereby complex
ideas and information structures can be represented and manipulated,
even without the use of a computer. </p>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<abstract resp="#LB">
<p>Good database design involves the acquisition and deployment of
skills which have a wider relevance to the educational process. From
a set of more or less instinctive rules of thumb a formal discipline
or "methodology" of database design has evolved. Applying that
methodology can be of great benefit to a very wide range of academic
subjects: it requires fundamental skills of abstraction and
generalisation and it provides a simple mechanism whereby complex
ideas and information structures can be represented and manipulated,
even without the use of a computer. </p>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<profileDesc>
<abstract>
<p>This paper is a draft studying
various aspects of using the TEI
as a reference serialization framework
for LMF. Comments are welcome to bring
this to a useful document for the
community.
</p>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<abstract>
<p>This paper is a draft studying
various aspects of using the TEI
as a reference serialization framework
for LMF. Comments are welcome to bring
this to a useful document for the
community.
</p>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<profileDesc>
<abstract xml:lang="en">
<p>The recent archaeological emphasis
on the study of settlement patterns,
landscape and palaeoenvironments has
shaped and re-shaped our understanding
of the Viking settlement of Iceland.
This paper reviews the developments
in Icelandic archaeology, examining
both theoretical and practical advances.
Particular attention is paid to new
ideas in terms of settlement patterns
and resource exploitation. Finally,
some of the key studies of the ecological
consequences of the Norse
<foreign xml:lang="is">landnám</foreign>
are presented. </p>
</abstract>
<abstract xml:lang="fr">
<p>L’accent récent des
recherches archéologiques sur l’étude des
configurations spatiales des colonies, de la
géographie des sites ainsi que des éléments
paléo-environnementaux nous mène à réexaminer
et réévaluer nos connaissances acquises sur
la colonisation de l’Islande par les Vikings.
Cet article passe en revue le développement
de l’archéologie islandaise en examinant les
progrès théoriques et pratiques en la matière.
Une attention particulière est portée sur
l’étude des configurations spatiales des
colonies ainsi qu’une considération des
questions d’exploitation des ressources.
Finalement, l’article présente un aperçu des
études principales qui traitent des
conséquences écologiques du
<foreign xml:lang="is">landnám</foreign>
islandais.</p>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<abstract xml:lang="en">
<p>The recent archaeological emphasis
on the study of settlement patterns,
landscape and palaeoenvironments has
shaped and re-shaped our understanding
of the Viking settlement of Iceland.
This paper reviews the developments
in Icelandic archaeology, examining
both theoretical and practical advances.
Particular attention is paid to new
ideas in terms of settlement patterns
and resource exploitation. Finally,
some of the key studies of the ecological
consequences of the Norse
<foreign xml:lang="is">landnám</foreign>
are presented. </p>
</abstract>
<abstract xml:lang="fr">
<p>L’accent récent des
recherches archéologiques sur l’étude des
configurations spatiales des colonies, de la
géographie des sites ainsi que des éléments
paléo-environnementaux nous mène à réexaminer
et réévaluer nos connaissances acquises sur
la colonisation de l’Islande par les Vikings.
Cet article passe en revue le développement
de l’archéologie islandaise en examinant les
progrès théoriques et pratiques en la matière.
Une attention particulière est portée sur
l’étude des configurations spatiales des
colonies ainsi qu’une considération des
questions d’exploitation des ressources.
Finalement, l’article présente un aperçu des
études principales qui traitent des
conséquences écologiques du
<foreign xml:lang="is">landnám</foreign>
islandais.</p>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<profileDesc>
<abstract>
<list>
<item>An annual HBC supply ship is
set to the North West Coast for mid-September.</item>
<item>
<name key="pelly_jh">Pelly</name> writes
to ascertain the British Government's plans
for the lands associated with the Oregon Treaty;
he wants to know what will happen to the HBC's
establishment on the southern <name type="place"
key="vancouver_island">Vancouver Island</name>.
He adds that a former Crown grant, an 1838 exclusive
trade-grant for the lands in question, has yet to
expire.</item>
<item>The minutes discuss the nature of the HBC's
original entitlements and question whether or not,
and in what capacity, the Oregon Treaty affects the
HBC's position. The majority council further
investigation, and to reply cautiously and
judiciously to the HBC inquiry.</item>
<item>A
summary of a meeting with <name key="pelly_jh">Pelly</name> is offered in
order to elucidate the HBC's intentions.</item>
<item>
<name key="grey_hg">Lord Grey</name> calls
for greater consideration on the issue of
colonization; he asks that <name key="stephen_j">Stephen</name> write the Company,
asking them to detail their intentions, and to
state their legal opinion for entitlement.
</item>
</list>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<abstract>
<list>
<item>An annual HBC supply ship is
set to the North West Coast for mid-September.</item>
<item>
<name key="pelly_jh">Pelly</name> writes
to ascertain the British Government's plans
for the lands associated with the Oregon Treaty;
he wants to know what will happen to the HBC's
establishment on the southern <name type="place"
key="vancouver_island">Vancouver Island</name>.
He adds that a former Crown grant, an 1838 exclusive
trade-grant for the lands in question, has yet to
expire.</item>
<item>The minutes discuss the nature of the HBC's
original entitlements and question whether or not,
and in what capacity, the Oregon Treaty affects the
HBC's position. The majority council further
investigation, and to reply cautiously and
judiciously to the HBC inquiry.</item>
<item>A
summary of a meeting with <name key="pelly_jh">Pelly</name> is offered in
order to elucidate the HBC's intentions.</item>
<item>
<name key="grey_hg">Lord Grey</name> calls
for greater consideration on the issue of
colonization; he asks that <name key="stephen_j">Stephen</name> write the Company,
asking them to detail their intentions, and to
state their legal opinion for entitlement.
</item>
</list>
</abstract>
</profileDesc>
<change> (en)
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange>
<change xml:id="DRAFT1">First draft in pencil</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT2"
notBefore="1880-12-09">First revision, mostly
using green ink</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT3"
notBefore="1881-02-13">Final corrections as
supplied to printer.</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
<creation>
<listChange>
<change xml:id="DRAFT1">First draft in pencil</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT2"
notBefore="1880-12-09">First revision, mostly
using green ink</change>
<change xml:id="DRAFT3"
notBefore="1881-02-13">Final corrections as
supplied to printer.</change>
</listChange>
</creation>
</profileDesc>
2.7 Minimal and Recommended Headers
<teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>Common sense, a machine-readable transcript</title>
<author>Paine, Thomas (1737-1809)</author>
<respStmt>
<resp>compiled by</resp>
<name>Jon K Adams</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<editionStmt>
<edition>
<date>1986</date>
</edition>
</editionStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<distributor>Oxford Text Archive.</distributor>
<address>
<addrLine>Oxford University Computing Services,</addrLine>
<addrLine>13 Banbury Road,</addrLine>
<addrLine>Oxford OX2 6RB,</addrLine>
<addrLine>UK</addrLine>
</address>
</publicationStmt>
<notesStmt>
<note>Brief notes on the text are in a
supplementary file.</note>
</notesStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<biblStruct>
<monogr>
<editor>Foner, Philip S.</editor>
<title>The collected writings of Thomas Paine</title>
<imprint>
<pubPlace>New York</pubPlace>
<publisher>Citadel Press</publisher>
<date>1945</date>
</imprint>
</monogr>
</biblStruct>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<encodingDesc>
<samplingDecl>
<p>Editorial notes in the Foner edition have not
been reproduced. </p>
<p>Blank lines and multiple blank spaces, including paragraph
indents, have not been preserved. </p>
</samplingDecl>
<editorialDecl>
<correction status="high"
method="silent">
<p>The following errors
in the Foner edition have been corrected:
<list>
<item>p. 13 l. 7 cotemporaries contemporaries</item>
<item>p. 28 l. 26 [comma] [period]</item>
<item>p. 84 l. 4 kin kind</item>
<item>p. 95 l. 1 stuggle struggle</item>
<item>p. 101 l. 4 certainy certainty</item>
<item>p. 167 l. 6 than that</item>
<item>p. 209 l. 24 publshed published</item>
</list>
</p>
</correction>
<normalization>
<p>No normalization beyond that performed
by Foner, if any. </p>
</normalization>
<quotation marks="all">
<p>All double quotation marks
rendered with ", all single quotation marks with
apostrophe. </p>
</quotation>
<hyphenation eol="none">
<p>Hyphenated words that appear at the
end of the line in the Foner edition have been reformed.</p>
</hyphenation>
<stdVals>
<p>The values of <att>when-iso</att> on the <gi>time</gi>
element always end in the format <val>HH:MM</val> or
<val>HH</val>; i.e., seconds, fractions thereof, and time
zone designators are not present.</p>
</stdVals>
<interpretation>
<p>Compound proper names are marked. </p>
<p>Dates are marked. </p>
<p>Italics are recorded without interpretation. </p>
</interpretation>
</editorialDecl>
<classDecl>
<taxonomy xml:id="lcsh">
<bibl>Library of Congress Subject Headings</bibl>
</taxonomy>
<taxonomy xml:id="lc">
<bibl>Library of Congress Classification</bibl>
</taxonomy>
</classDecl>
</encodingDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date>1774</date>
</creation>
<langUsage>
<language ident="en" usage="100">English.</language>
</langUsage>
<textClass>
<keywords scheme="#lcsh">
<term>Political science</term>
<term>United States -- Politics and government —
Revolution, 1775-1783</term>
</keywords>
<classCode scheme="#lc">JC 177</classCode>
</textClass>
</profileDesc>
<revisionDesc>
<change when="1996-01-22" who="#MSM"> finished proofreading </change>
<change when="1995-10-30" who="#LB"> finished proofreading </change>
<change notBefore="1995-07-04" who="#RG"> finished data entry at end of term </change>
<change notAfter="1995-01-01" who="#RG"> began data entry before New Year 1995 </change>
</revisionDesc>
</teiHeader>
<fileDesc>
<titleStmt>
<title>Common sense, a machine-readable transcript</title>
<author>Paine, Thomas (1737-1809)</author>
<respStmt>
<resp>compiled by</resp>
<name>Jon K Adams</name>
</respStmt>
</titleStmt>
<editionStmt>
<edition>
<date>1986</date>
</edition>
</editionStmt>
<publicationStmt>
<distributor>Oxford Text Archive.</distributor>
<address>
<addrLine>Oxford University Computing Services,</addrLine>
<addrLine>13 Banbury Road,</addrLine>
<addrLine>Oxford OX2 6RB,</addrLine>
<addrLine>UK</addrLine>
</address>
</publicationStmt>
<notesStmt>
<note>Brief notes on the text are in a
supplementary file.</note>
</notesStmt>
<sourceDesc>
<biblStruct>
<monogr>
<editor>Foner, Philip S.</editor>
<title>The collected writings of Thomas Paine</title>
<imprint>
<pubPlace>New York</pubPlace>
<publisher>Citadel Press</publisher>
<date>1945</date>
</imprint>
</monogr>
</biblStruct>
</sourceDesc>
</fileDesc>
<encodingDesc>
<samplingDecl>
<p>Editorial notes in the Foner edition have not
been reproduced. </p>
<p>Blank lines and multiple blank spaces, including paragraph
indents, have not been preserved. </p>
</samplingDecl>
<editorialDecl>
<correction status="high"
method="silent">
<p>The following errors
in the Foner edition have been corrected:
<list>
<item>p. 13 l. 7 cotemporaries contemporaries</item>
<item>p. 28 l. 26 [comma] [period]</item>
<item>p. 84 l. 4 kin kind</item>
<item>p. 95 l. 1 stuggle struggle</item>
<item>p. 101 l. 4 certainy certainty</item>
<item>p. 167 l. 6 than that</item>
<item>p. 209 l. 24 publshed published</item>
</list>
</p>
</correction>
<normalization>
<p>No normalization beyond that performed
by Foner, if any. </p>
</normalization>
<quotation marks="all">
<p>All double quotation marks
rendered with ", all single quotation marks with
apostrophe. </p>
</quotation>
<hyphenation eol="none">
<p>Hyphenated words that appear at the
end of the line in the Foner edition have been reformed.</p>
</hyphenation>
<stdVals>
<p>The values of <att>when-iso</att> on the <gi>time</gi>
element always end in the format <val>HH:MM</val> or
<val>HH</val>; i.e., seconds, fractions thereof, and time
zone designators are not present.</p>
</stdVals>
<interpretation>
<p>Compound proper names are marked. </p>
<p>Dates are marked. </p>
<p>Italics are recorded without interpretation. </p>
</interpretation>
</editorialDecl>
<classDecl>
<taxonomy xml:id="lcsh">
<bibl>Library of Congress Subject Headings</bibl>
</taxonomy>
<taxonomy xml:id="lc">
<bibl>Library of Congress Classification</bibl>
</taxonomy>
</classDecl>
</encodingDesc>
<profileDesc>
<creation>
<date>1774</date>
</creation>
<langUsage>
<language ident="en" usage="100">English.</language>
</langUsage>
<textClass>
<keywords scheme="#lcsh">
<term>Political science</term>
<term>United States -- Politics and government —
Revolution, 1775-1783</term>
</keywords>
<classCode scheme="#lc">JC 177</classCode>
</textClass>
</profileDesc>
<revisionDesc>
<change when="1996-01-22" who="#MSM"> finished proofreading </change>
<change when="1995-10-30" who="#LB"> finished proofreading </change>
<change notBefore="1995-07-04" who="#RG"> finished data entry at end of term </change>
<change notAfter="1995-01-01" who="#RG"> began data entry before New Year 1995 </change>
</revisionDesc>
</teiHeader>
9 Computer-mediated Communication
<!-- In the <teiHeader>: --><profileDesc>
<particDesc>
<listPerson>
<person role="user" sex="male"
xml:id="cmc_user_01">
<persName type="userName">M</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:M</note>
<affiliation>
<email>mike@mydomain.com</email>
<country>CH</country>
</affiliation>
</person>
<!-- … more persons … -->
<person role="user" sex="female"
xml:id="cmc_user_06">
<persName type="userName">P</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:P</note>
<affiliation>
<email>pat@super.net</email>
<country>ES</country>
</affiliation>
</person>
<person role="user" xml:id="cmc_user_07">
<persName type="userName">PKP</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:Pi</note>
</person>
</listPerson>
</particDesc>
</profileDesc>
<!-- In the <body>: -->
<div type="wiki_discussion_page" n="073">
<!-- 4 other <post>s -->
<post modality="written"
xml:id="cmc_post04" indentLevel="1"
replyTo="#cmc_post_073.004" who="#cmc_user_06">
<p>Those haven't happened. If they do, we can revisit the concern.</p>
<signed generatedBy="template"
rend="noLineBreak">
<ref target="/wiki/User:P">P</ref>
<date>01:35, 8 April 2014 (UTC)</date>
</signed>
</post>
</div>
<profileDesc>
<particDesc>
<listPerson>
<person role="user" xml:id="u001">
<persName type="userName">M</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:M</note>
</person>
<!-- more persons -->
<person role="user" xml:id="u006">
<persName type="userName">P</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:P</note>
</person>
<person role="user" xml:id="u007">
<persName type="userName">PKP</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:Pi</note>
</person>
</listPerson>
</particDesc>
<textDesc>
<channel/>
<constitution/>
<derivation/>
<domain/>
<factuality/>
<interaction>
<timeline>
<when xml:id="t001"
absolute="2011-03-23T19:56:00"/>
<when xml:id="t002"
absolute="2011-06-14T21:22:00"/>
<when xml:id="t003"
absolute="2011-06-14T23:28:00"/>
<when xml:id="t004"
absolute="2011-07-02T07:20:00"/>
<when xml:id="t005"
absolute="2011-07-21T01:00:00"/>
<when xml:id="t006"
absolute="2014-04-08T01:35:00"/>
</timeline>
</interaction>
<preparedness/>
<purpose/>
</textDesc>
</profileDesc>
<particDesc>
<listPerson>
<person role="user" xml:id="u001">
<persName type="userName">M</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:M</note>
</person>
<!-- more persons -->
<person role="user" xml:id="u006">
<persName type="userName">P</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:P</note>
</person>
<person role="user" xml:id="u007">
<persName type="userName">PKP</persName>
<note type="link">/wiki/User:Pi</note>
</person>
</listPerson>
</particDesc>
<textDesc>
<channel/>
<constitution/>
<derivation/>
<domain/>
<factuality/>
<interaction>
<timeline>
<when xml:id="t001"
absolute="2011-03-23T19:56:00"/>
<when xml:id="t002"
absolute="2011-06-14T21:22:00"/>
<when xml:id="t003"
absolute="2011-06-14T23:28:00"/>
<when xml:id="t004"
absolute="2011-07-02T07:20:00"/>
<when xml:id="t005"
absolute="2011-07-21T01:00:00"/>
<when xml:id="t006"
absolute="2014-04-08T01:35:00"/>
</timeline>
</interaction>
<preparedness/>
<purpose/>
</textDesc>
</profileDesc>
12 Representation of Primary Sources
12.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
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12.7 Identifying Changes and Revisions
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